April 10th, 2003, 12:17 pm
I'm going to copy a bit of the bombing article, in case Ha'aretz decides to alter it again. This is how it opens:QuotePolice doubt claim Jews bombed Palestinian high schoolIsraeli police and security officials maintain there is no evidence indicating a Jewish extremist group was responsible for the bombing of a Palestinian school in the northern West Bank on Wednesday.Take a close look at that. It's a true journalistic gem! Mind you, this is not a follow-up article; this is, as of now, the only report Ha'aretz has online of the incident. Mind you also that Ha'aretz is a pretty good newspaper, and the nearest thing to objective, with regard to the Palestinian situation, available in the mainstream Israeli media (and more objective in many ways than mainstream US media!).But look -- look! -- at how this article opens. Here is The Guardian's (NOT an American paper) article on the same matter:Playground bombing injures 20 PalestiniansThe Guardian article begins withQuoteA bomb, which may have been planted by Jewish extremists, exploded in a West Bank school playground yesterday, injuring 20 Palestinian children.Note that it begins with a description of an event, with one clause indicating the relevance of the event to a bigger matter. Contrast this with the Ha'aretz article, which opens by telling us that "Israeli police and security people maintain there is no evidence indicating a Jewish extremist group was responsible...," and then says only that the event that this is all about is a bombing at a particular place on a particular day. Can you see how remarkable this styling is? Now, if this were a follow-on article, it might make sense, journalistically, to report in this way: the original article is about the bombing, and the follow-on article is about the possibility of the involvement of this Jewish terrorist group. But this is not a follow-on article! This is all you get from Ha'aretz's English online version on the event (The Jerusalem Post seems to have ignored the whole thing)! I can see that it makes sense, politically, to report in this way, if you want -- as indeed I expect the writers and editors of Ha'aretz do want -- to keep things that might jeopardize Israel's "special relationship" with the US from being picked up by the US media. But I can't see that it makes a lot of sense in objective journalism.Maybe its a new frontier in journalism. The same sort of styling can be used to introduce any sort of bad news: "Israeli police find no evidence linking a Jewish extremist group to..." You fill in the blank. "20 car pile-up in Kentucky?" Sure. "Errant bomb in Baghdad market?" Why not? "Tooth decay?" Works for me. Why, I think I might start using this style, just to see if I can catch a hint of how it makes sense!Note also that it is a Jewish "extremist" group. Ha'aretz certainly avoided an unfortunate term there! I wonder how often it reports on Palestinian "extremist" groups?Also, "Israeli police and security officials?" Hello? Isn't this event generally outside of their jurisdiction? Why did they go out of their way to make the remarkable claim about an event that is not their direct concern, other than to provide Ha'aretz with its interesting openning sentence. And, even ignoring that a claim of responsibility is not seen as evidence of any sort by these stalwart Israeli police and security officials, why have they said "we have no hard evidence" (as they apparently actually said, according to the Guardian article, and not "there is no evidence," as Ha'aretz -- apparently falsely -- reported them as having said) about something that they haven't really investigated at all? Are there other events that they would like to announce that they have no hard evidence about? Crimes in Australia? Tooth decay?Could even zerdna and ppauper be stupid enough not to recognize that there is something a little odd about this Ha'aretz article? Maybe we'll find out! Have at it, gentlemen.